2014—2015学年度南昌市高三第一次模拟测试卷
英语参考答案及评分标准

第四部分：写作
第一节 短文改错
I’m going to study in the senior middle school on September. I can live either at school and at
inor
home. But I can’t decide because both has advantages and disadvantages. At home, I have my
have
own room, but I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 5-6 student at
sostudents
school. Maybe I can’t sleep good. It’s a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I
well
enjoy eat with my classmates. I think it’s a great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at
eating
home, I’ll have︿ride to school. It’s a waste of time and not safely. It’s so hard to make a
tosafe
decision.

第二节 书面表达
One possible version
Dear Li Hua,
This is Collins from Teens. I’m sorry to hear from you that you plan to drop out and fin d a job away from your parents. It is a very dangerous idea for a teenager like you to intend to make a living away from home.
As a high school student, it is natural for us to meet problems in our school life. Both our teachers and parents show their love for us every day in the form of praises, criticisms or even complaints. We should be aware of it and grateful to it.
In my opinion, the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school. To face the unknown world is our next step after graduation.
I hope my idea will be useful to you.
Yours Sincerely
Collins