Passage 1:
【原文】
While the rest of the world played soccer or the British football, Americans played basketball and baseball. But now soccer is rapidly becoming a major sport in the United States for reasons as simple as the game itself. School officials like it and kids like it. For the school authorities, it’s much cheaper to set up a soccer team. And for the kids, they don’t need to be big or tall to play soccer. All they need is the desire to run.
【参考译文】
当世界其他地方都在踢足球或英式足球的时候,美国人在打篮球和棒球。但是现在,足球已经快速成为美国一个主要的运动项目,其中的缘由和这项运动本身一样简单。校领导喜欢足球,孩子们也喜欢足球。对于校方来说,成立一个足球队成本更少。而对孩子们来说,踢足球并不要求他们长得高高壮壮。他们所需要的就是对奔跑的渴望。
【评析】
这篇文章还是很容易的。话题是我们非常熟悉的体育。平时注意体育话题相关词汇积累。
翻译的时候,注意表达。本篇语气篇口语化。因此翻译一篇文章弄清楚文章的风格也很重要,这样表达时,就知道到底是正式语气表达还是非正式语气表达。有时也有必要了解文章的体材:议论性、说明性还是描述性,从整体把握译文的风格。
1.“as simple as …itself”一般译为“正如…本身一样简单或纯粹”
2.“big or tall”。在这里我们形象地译为“高高壮壮”或“高高大大”
Passage 2:
【原文】
What really makes me mad is the attitude towards morals. Some people are really shocked because actors are allowed to walk about the stage with little clothes on these days. But these same people are not shocked by advertisements which persuade the public to buy things which can do real harm to people, like cigarettes and alcohol for example. I think a lot of advertisements are much more immoral than so-called pornographic or dirty plays and books because they lie or at least disguise the truth.
【参考译文】
真正让我发狂的是人们对道德的态度。演员可以着装暴露,在台上走来走去,这让一些人感到惊讶,然而同样是这批人,却不会因为广告劝说公众购买如烟酒等对他们有害的产品而震惊。我认为比起那些所谓的色情或黄色节目和书刊,很多广告更不道德,因为它们在说谎,至少在掩盖真相。
【评析】
本段话共由4句话组成,后三个句子都略微偏长,但是并不复杂,所以难度一般。较难把握的几个词组如下:
1. little clothes连用。little如果作为“少”修饰的是不可数名词,很明显这里不合适,可以考虑little表示“短的”意思,意译为“着装暴露”。
2. pornographic对学生词汇量要求较高。这个单词表示“色情的、黄色的”。同时,dirty这里不能直译为“脏的”,而应该采用它的引申义“下流的、色情的”。
3. disguise较难,表示“掩饰、掩盖”,disguise the truth也就可以翻译为“掩盖真相”。