I’m back~!AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^

我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。

每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。

在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！

8. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Topic 8 Has TV destroyedcommunication?

To agree or disagree with the statement that television has destroyed the communication among family and friends is a matter of balancing its pros and cons（赞成者和反对者）. However, if one considersthe following reasons, he or she may disagree with the title statement as I do.

First, some people may hold the view that friends and family would easily fight with each other for the programs on the television that he or she wants to watch. For example, the child may be likely to switch to（转变，转换）the cartoon channel while thefather wants to see the news program, and the mother prefers a romantic movie.However, as far as I am concerned, the scenario is an exaggeration.（这个例子有些夸张）I do not think such a trivial（不重要的，琐碎的）quarrel would destroy anything important, and as friends or family, the one result is to attribute to（可换due to）the communication. Each person would present their reasons for watching the program, so that next time they would not argue for the same thing again. They know the taste of each number of the family and they will probably try to avoid such conflicts.（文章在反驳，不至于因为这点分歧就闹得不愉快，如果大家都知道互相的爱好的话，就可以避免这些冲突）

In addition, television offers us numerous（许多的）topics to talk about. Television informs us of what is happening around the world. Everybody has his/her own reaction towards these events. Without television, we may hold the idea that noone would have the chance to share. When the friends and the whole family sit together in front of a television, a nice and intimate（亲密的）atmosphere is provided for communication. Through such kind of communication, family members can understand each other better. A small example may give some light to this point. Once I had some disagreement and had not talk to my dad for several days. One night, when my dad and I were watching television together, we found an interesting topic that both of us wanted tosay something about it, so we said a little first and talk much later and allthe unpleasant disappear out of existence.（作者认为，相反的，电视给我们的生活带来了更多的话题，让人与人之间的沟通变得更多）

So, in my point of view,nothing has been destroyed by television. On the contrary it might improve our communication.（结尾有点短，可以再多说两句，总结一下两个论述段的）

好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互评作文的事情，这个作文互评目前只有我在做，我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助，如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以进步非常快，做过才知道！）

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