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每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。

在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！

12. Many people visit museums when they travel tonew places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer.

Topic 12 Why do people go to museums?

As a tour guide for a Japanese woman in the city of Beijingthree years ago, I was amazed that she would be interested in the ChineseCulture and History Museum, which even Chinese pupilsdoes not like to visit. Museum in my eyes used to be a really boring place,which could only display items that are dull（无趣的）and motionless（静止的，不运动的）. Ithought Museums were dead. Until after I traveled to some places myself did Istart to realize the life of museums.（作者通过自己的实际经验来表达对博物馆看法的改变，这是老外喜欢看到的事实说法）

A place consists mainly of its past and present in terms of time. Whenyou are visiting one place, the existing scenery（现实的风景）, streetsand buildings give you chances to understand its present easily. But when itcomes to the past of a place, things are different. With time going by, thepast is always staying in the past. Sometimes with the new constructions, aplace's past can even be burnt into ashes.（本段在讲述博物馆的意义，记录一个地点的过去，避免一个地方的历史由于新事物的覆盖而化为灰烬）

In most cases, museums preserve part of the original appearance of acertain place and present plenty of information in terms of objects andpictures that one cannot obtain from the present. Only when information fromthe present and that from the past are combined could one obtain a relativelyintegrate（完整的）image ofthe place. That is why the Japanese woman insisted that she visit the Cultureand History Museumin Beijing. Like most of other cities,Skyscrapers, glass walls and the modern street scenes are all over the place inthis city. The red and gray walls, the palaces and small courtyards, which weretypical scenes in the past, can only be found in the vintage（古老的）photographsin the museum.

Thus, visiting museums is a very effective way to understand a place'spast, therefore one can get a whole picture of a place that one visits.（文章段落清晰，表达出了去博物馆的重要性和意义，非常值得研习~）

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