Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^

我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。

每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。

在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！

19. Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Topic 19 Highways or public transportation?

In this modern society, governments always confront（遭遇困境）the dilemma whether spending more money on improving roads and highways or on improving public transportation. This problem is a much-debated one in that it affects everybody in his or her daily life. Personally speaking, I would be one of those who argue that governments should spend more money on improving public transportation.（公共交通肯定是政府投入的重中之重）

Though it is quite rational（合理的）for average people to choose roads and highways because of the obvious reason that a better road condition could suspend more vehicles and accelerate the speed of them. A close scrutiny of the potential benefits of choosing roads and highways would reveal how flimsy it is to stick to the propensity. A better road condition would bring with it more vehicles, thus a much more crowded traffic. Have you ever been caught in atraffic jam? Then how could just spending more money on improving roads and highways do?（本段是让步段，明确指出投入建设高速公路的好处，但结尾时作者连续抛出两个问题，交通拥堵遇到过吗？它是否跟更多地投钱到高速公路上有关系呢？这两句是过渡句，说明要接下一段反对的论据了）

Besides, putting the discussion in a wider context, a further reason why I advocate the later lies in the fact that improvement of road condition would stimulate more people to use cars and hence more energy would be used and more pollution would be exposed（被暴露）. This would be the last thing that everyone would like to see. But if we choose to improve public transportation, a quite different result could be.This can be demonstrated by the undeniable fact of our city. We have greatly improved the bus network and reduced the parking places since several years ago. Now more and more people shift from cars to buses and other publictransportation, and an azure （蔚蓝的天空）sky can be highly savored again.（改善公共交通与保护环境息息相关）

Finally, frankly speaking, there is also a more practical reason why I choose to improve public transportations. Public transportation encourages asense of community. People who travel to work together all the time get to know each other better while cars isolate us from neighbors. An improvement inpublic transportation would make it fit more people's schedules and more people would choose to take public transportation to enjoy communicating with each other.（作者继续跟进了第二个理由，公共交通可以让人民更多地交往相处，这个理由有些牵强，不过表达的没有问题，也可以算是理由，只不过不是最重要的。）

When taking into account all these merits and drawbacks I have numerated, we may safely arrived at the conclusion that we should put more money and concerns more about public transportation. We would experience more convenience when traveling as well as an appreciable nature environment.（套话，学一下吧，这位考生写的套话没有那么常见，可以拿来用一用。总体来说，是一篇不错的文章）

好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

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