Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^

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每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。

在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！

28. Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too muchattention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures andcelebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.

Topic 28Media and celebrities

In this global information age where newspapers or magazinesare always handy and TV has already turned so many people into couch tomatoes,few people concern about what these mass media has brought to us; we just acceptit anyway. While I think the current focus on personal lives of famous peopleby these media requires further consideration.

Admittedly, it is reasonable for those media tocontinuously pay great attention to celebrities, the present fierce competitionof the various media, the hard-to-pleased audiences' taste, the bombasticeffect of coverage of these shining figures. No surprise sometimes that we feelwe just know more than those famous people than themselves.

However, the consequence of such intense coverage on publicfigures' personal lives not only violate those beingfocused on a certain level,but also do harm to us beinginformed in some ways. Firstly, the privacy ofthose celebrities is ineluctably encroached from time to time.Sometimes theresult is sad - do not forget the tragedy of Princess Diana. Secondly, ourattention is certainly being diverted by such tide of craziness aboutcelebrities. What about those viewers who want to see something about ordinarypeople' lives? How can mass media not concern more about those people sufferingfrom pain and poverty?

Furthermore, one of the significant results of thecurrent fad on famous figures is that their behavior is so influential while atthe same time the media have little guarantee to ensure what the say and dowill not mislead the mass public and even cause more problems. For example, ifa famous figure is being asked about his or her point of view in a field he orshe is not quite acquainted, the words presented to the audience may bemisleading. This is especially harmful to those young people who are morelikely to watch those programs of their idols, and also are mostly vulnerableto influential but harmful sayings.

In a sense, I do not quite appreciate the coverage of peoplein the center of spotlight, maybe once the mass media turn a little bit fromtheir current focus to other aspects of the society, they may find out that theworld is wonderful all the same.

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