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托福分类话题写作每日一练 第32期

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32. Is it better to enjoy your money when you earnit or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specificreasons and examples to support your opinion.

参考分析:

先讨论一下储蓄的必要性以及及时享乐的好处。

然后可以采取it depends策略进行选择。

是花钱及时享乐好呢还是把钱存起来好,要看钱的数目是多少。如果一个月赚

  • 800块,只有一个选择,花掉。

  • 2000块,就可以花掉一些,存起来一些。

  • 20000块,就多花一些,也可以多存一些。

32、存钱比较好
(1)存钱可以防备不时之需。如生病等等
(2)存钱可以买非常贵重的商品,如房子,汽车等等
(3)存钱放到未来花,可以更好的享受生活,如去欧洲,美洲旅游等等

Topic 32 Spend money orsave them?

Some people say that it is better to enjoy your money assoon as you earn it while others prefer to save the money for later. It's adifficult choice faced by lots of people because of the different attitudesthey hold towards money. As far as I am concerned, I vote for the formerchoice, which is that it is better for one to enjoy his or her money as soon asit is earned. Spending money as soon as possible is my preference because of threereasons as follows.

First, we can observe easily in the modern society thatthe dominant philosophy nowadays is 'enjoy your life when you are still young'.Most young adults like to work for a period of time and then go on for a tripto visit some places they have never been to. Those trips not only help them tokeep in shape but also provides them different kinds of knowledge and newperspective in looking at their environment. Other people spend the money fortheir leisure, which helps them to relax and go back to work with enoughenergy.

In the old days, it is said that people who save money ina bank understand the philosophy of thrift. Actually, economists say that inthe modern world saving money in a bank is the quickest way to lose it.Moreover, none of the rich people became rich by getting interests from thebank. Living in a constantly changing world, we should adjust ourselves toaccept the new ways of investing our money to different areas in order to getthe most of it. That is probably the reason why most of the people nowadays puttheir money into business to get a better payback.

The third obvious(显然的)reason why I prefer spending money ratherthan saving them is that it is part of the contribution for the economic growthin our country. If nobody has the needs to buy stuff from others and themarket, nobody will think about how to produce useful products and sell them tomake the most profits. Some countries continue to lower the interests in orderto force people to spend their money and therefore benefit the society as wellas the people themselves. In this broad view, I prefer spending money ratherthan saving them.

In conclusion, I prefer spending money because itbenefits ourselves as well as people around us. It's also important for kids toknow how to save money as a sense of thrift. Nevertheless, spending money isstill the best way to make our lives enjoyable and worthwhile.

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