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73. Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

参考分析:

观点是:计算机带来了方便的同时也造成了很多的麻烦。尽管如此,计算机的发明仍然是伟大的进步。

  • 计算机带来的方便,数不胜数(beyond count; countless; too numerous to count)
  • 计算机带来的麻烦,比如:千年虫(Y2K)问题;电子游戏的负面作用;网络即时聊天系统(instant message programs such as icq, MS messenger, Yahoo paper etc.)

73、同意计算机使工作变的更加容易和方便了
(1)计算机和很多工作结合在一起,减轻了工作量,很多计算一秒钟就完成了
(2)计算机让工作变的更加赏心悦目
(3)计算机使生活变的更加方便,如互相交流,EMAIL

Topic 73 Has computer made life easier?

Computers are involved in our world form sorted trash to satellite control, making our life easy, convenient and efficient. Obviously, it's a great revolution of human being. It's odd that some consider that computers make life more complex and stressful. I suppose computers will become a necessity, like food and water to the mankind.

Computers have changed people's life style, in a way that we can concentrate on scientific research rather than wasting time on data analyzing and calculating, for computers are much more efficient in dealing with these strenuous jobs. Many activities could not be run in their present form without computers. Examples are the banking systems, and the weather forecasting systems. How is it possible to deal with data-switching between banks and clients simultaneously and accurately without computers? As we known, weather forecasting requires multiprocessing data from the meteorological satellites and simulating the weather change, which are easy jobs for computers.

Although the knowledge of computer is not easy to acquired, especially at early stage, the IT industry has been making the computer operation system more friendly and at the same time more powerful. Therefore, using computers to handle problems is not the specialties of computer majors only. Even children can use computers to do their homework. We can now benefit a lot from computers in our day-to-day life.

One of the concerns is that computers may cause some troubles when we rely too much on them, such as various computer viruses and the Y2K problem. Nevertheless, computer experts will surely solve these problems and improve the computer technology. In this sense, the computer technology has much potential to develop.

After all, the computer is one of the most important inventions in the twentieth century. It has formed a new era in our life, and it affects culture, industry, science, education and other areas. Computerization is a trend nowadays, and computers are being used in many areas. Computers like any other technology hold the key to increased productivity, which will benefit all of us.

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necessity [ni'sesiti]

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n. 需要,必需品,必然

 
benefit ['benifit]

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n. 利益,津贴,保险金,义卖,义演
vt.

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concentrate ['kɔnsntreit]

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v. 集中,专心,浓缩
n. 浓缩物

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productivity [.prɔdʌk'tiviti]

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n. 生产率,生产能力

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efficient [i'fiʃənt]

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adj. 效率高的,胜任的

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potential [pə'tenʃəl]

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adj. 可能的,潜在的
n. 潜力,潜能

 
numerous ['nju:mərəs]

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adj. 为数众多的,许多

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control [kən'trəul]

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n. 克制,控制,管制,操作装置
vt. 控制

 
dealing ['di:liŋ]

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n. 经营方法,行为态度
(复数)dealin

 
revolution [.revə'lu:ʃən]

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n. 革命,旋转,转数

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