Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天,你呢!非常感谢大家的陪伴,我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了,不许偷懒,托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦,写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批,共同进步!^^
我已经托福三战过了,对考试各方面都很熟悉,所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我,我会尽力为大家解答。
每天的写作任务是这样的,写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱(如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明),我们将进入互批作文模式。在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲,请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较,找出自己的不足之处。开始吧!
77. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer.
参见:范文 |
77、男孩子和女孩子不应当分校 |
Topic 77 Should boys and girls go to separate schools?
Shouldboys and girls attend separate schools? This question is very arguable. Beforerendering my opinion, let's consider the advantages for boys and girls toattend separate schools. Since boys and girls are different in many ways, theyhave different hobbies and the ways to learn new things. If they attendseparate schools, the education can be more efficient because the school canteach them differently according to their personalities. But the disadvantages aregreater. While boys and girls attend separate schools, there're few chances forthem to communicate with opposite sexes, which will become a handicap for themto communicate with each other in their future.
As faras I concerned, boys and girls should not attend separate schools. The firstand foremost reason is that people should have experience with the opposite sexwhen they are at school, because the society consists of both male and femalemembers, and people have to learn how to communicate with the opposite sex.
Moreover,people have to learn from the opposite sex. For example, while females shouldlearn braveness from males, males should learn carefulness from females. In addition,in a family, to learn from the opposite sex becomes more important to keep thefamily harmonious. In addition, the knowledge of the opposite sex is alsoimportant. Without such knowledge, dealing with the opposite sex in arelationship becomes extremely difficult.
Finally,as we can see, it's definitely important for boys and girls to attend schoolstogether, so that they can learn from each other, communicate with each otherand they can understand each other well, which is very valuable for theirfuture.
好了,今天就说这么多,大家一定要坚持练习作文,每天进步一小点,一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升!希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去,写作都是硬功夫,跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的,功夫到家自然成,加油!
最后再mention一下互评作文的事情,这个作文互评目前只有我在做,我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助,如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的,一定要mail我加入哦!(互批可以进步非常快,做过才知道!)
可可托福备考小组官方邮箱:Keke3096@qq.com
申请互批小组成员的邮件title:an application for writing members XXX(你的可可用户名)
发送你的练习文章求批改的title:Essay 1 that need to be modified XXX(你的可可用户名)