范文：
　　Part 1
　　Sample A

　　Band 2
　　Apart from the fact that one of the content points has not been addressed, the answer contains frequent errors which are distracting, and which have a negative impact on the reader.

　　Band 4
　　The answer contains all the necessary information,yet is concise, and the language used is generally accurate. Overall, the impression on the reader is positive.
　　Part 2

　　Band 1
　　Due to misinterpretation of the task, the answer contains irrelevant information and the reader is not adequately informed. Whilst generally being organised satisfactorily, with an adequate range of grammar and vocabulary, there are several errors.

　　Band 5
　　The candidate's answer is effectively organised,covers all the important information clearly and contains a wide range of vocabulary and structures. There are few errors, and language is well controlled and natural sounding. The overall effect on the reader is very positive.