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  网友作文三:
  To: Ms Gedad
  From: Mr Fenliny
  Date: 4th August, 2008
  Subject: Reply to the invitation
  Room 204,**Road
  Minhang District
  Shanghai,http://ks.examda.com
  China (右上方)
  Thank you for your letter, Ms Gedad. We are very interested in your suggestion which[1] shown in the letter. And drama[2], I think, will be a quite good opportunity to have a further contact.
  The only little problem is the date of invitation because my schedule has been full this week. Could you check your agenda and make a change if possible? I'd like to hear your satisfied answer ASAP.
  Best wishes!
  your sincerely,
  Fenliny
  _________________________________________
  [1]Which is/was shown
  [2]改成动名词要好一些。 Attending a drama
  网友作文四:
  Dear Goddard,
  I have received the letter of Aug.7 and thank you for your letter[1] .
  I'm interested in your suggestion about our date [2] on Aug.10.I'd like to accpect your invitation to have a moive with you. I think we would have a nice day.
  Unfortunately,I need to meet my client on Aug.10,and I'm afraid that I have much work that week. Should we meet at 6.00 on Aug.14 afternoon. We could have dinner first if you're available.
  I'd like to hear you soon.[3]
  Best wishes.[4]
  Fenlini
  _________________________________________
  [1]合成一句好不好? Thanks for your letter on Aug.7th.
  [2]这是用在单身男女约会用的,咱们好像还不知道对方是否是单身哦! Appointment
  [3]I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
  [4]Sincerely yours
  网友作文五:
  Dear Angela,
  Thank you very much for your kind invitation. I'm very interested in the suggestions you mentioned about and hope to discuss with you on the details.
  I would be very pleased to enjoy your invitation for the drama. It's so kind of you.(去掉)
  Unfortunately, I have a big meeting with my boss on next Monday and i am unable to meet you on that day. Next Tuesday to Friday is possilbe for me. I would be greatful if you could tell me the suitable date for you.
  I look forward to hearing from you.
  Thanks and Best regards[1] .
  Fiona Cai
  _________________________________________
  [1]Sincerely yours



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