(六) 英汉对比。这一步一定要做，同学们可以看着范文的汉语翻译自己再用英语重反一次，对比英语原文找差距，找不同，体会英汉差异。改正自己汉语味较浓的句子。

如:目前，关于人和动物之间的关系出现了不同层次的讨论。

Nowadays,about people and animals’ relationship appear severl different layers of discussions.这句显然是chinglish,尤其是黑体的部分尤为突出，汉语里的出现有及物动词的性质，但直译为appear就讲不通了，因为appear是不及物动词。这句正确说法应该用there be 句型。

Nowadays there are discussions on several different levels about the relationship between humans and animals.

下面以剑桥文章举例说明：

A successful uniform needs to balance two key sets of needs.(大意为：成功的制服主要需要平衡两种需求。跟自己想到的表达方式对比一下，黑体部分值得借鉴)On the one hand,no uniform will work if staff feel uncomfortable or ugly. Giving the wearers a choice has become a key element in the way corporate clothing is introduced and managed. On the other , it is pointless if the look do not express the business’s marketing strategy . The greater chanllenge in this respect(短语“在这个方面”)is time. When it comes to human perceptions , first impressions count.(句型) Customers will size up the way staff look in just a few seconds , and that few seconds(习惯表达，强调)will color their attitudes(动词color极其到位，可扩展为短语整体记忆)

from then on . Those few seconds can be so important that big companies are prepared to invest (动词，形象是否比自己想到的spent 要好？)years,and millions of pounds ,getting them right