In some countries, children are expected to study long hours both at and after school, therefore, they have little leisure time.
What are the positive and negative effects on the children and society as a whole?

题目解读

此题目为教育类话题，体裁为议论文下属的利弊分析类，要分别陈述将大部分时间花在学习上对社会和孩子自身的影响。

写作建议
Introductory Paragraph:
交代background information，
如:Education, especially children's, is undoubtedly of vital importance to a nation's sustained economic development.

再进一步导入具体内容:In some countries, a broad swath of students spend a huge amount of time working

hard not only at school but after school as well, leading to the fact that they enjoy less leisure time.

Body Paragraph One:
对孩子产生的积极影响:
小孩子可扎实掌握更多深层次知识。
Children can have a thorough grasp of an in-depth knowledge.
对孩子产生的负面影响:
小孩子花过多时间在学习上可能会对成长不利。可举例说明一下，比如:长时间的sedentary lifestyle令人们担忧他们的健康状况。
The detrimental effects of working long hours on healthy growth are easy to be seen.

Body Paragraph Two:
对社会产生的积极影响:营造一种爱学习的社会风气，对整个国家的教育发展起到推动作用。
An atmosphere for study has been created, which in turn has far-reaching consequences for policymakers who

decide what the government's education policies will be.
对社会产生的负面影响:长时间在学习上的专注导致学生兴趣丧失，反过来同样对教育的发展起到抑制作用。
Students who are engaging in long-hour study are likely to lose interest, leading to the fact that children's learning isinhibited. Therefore, the education system will be affected to some extent.
在整个论述的过程中，考生可采用举例论证和因果论证这两种常见也是最有效的论证方法详细展开。

Concluding Paragraph:
长时间学习对孩子自身和整个社会利弊皆有，可通过鼓励孩子在学习过程中积极参加更多的课外活动。消除弊端，把孩子朝受益的方向引领。
To conclude, there are both downsides and upsides with regard to the issue that a considerable amount of time is spent by students on study. Only when children are encouraged to participate actively in more extracurricular activities can they enjoy the benefits of working for a long time.