写作题目:
2014年5月10日雅思小作文写作真题TASK1
流程图:
关于制作软(质)干酪的五个过程:
写作题目分析:
此次小作文为流程图,展现了soft cheese的制作过程。整体来说,是个比较简单的流程图,没有出现分叉走向不同方向的情况。
需要注意顺序连接词和动词的正确使用。
常用连接词推荐:
At the beginning of the process, next, subsequently, Next, …, after which …, …before v.ing, …, and …, Finally。
动词在该题中可分别用到mix, transport/send … to…, cool… at the temperate of …, add, employ/deloy, heat, come out of/release。
该篇建议用被动的语气表达,会更客观。展现3个步骤。
At the beginning of the process, water and milk will be mixed together. Then the mixture will be transported to a cooling storage container, being cooled at the temperate of 5 for 2 hours. After that, a small amount of salt is added before it takes 5 hours for fermentation to emerge finally.