2014年10月25日雅思写作解析
　　10月25日雅思大作文：是选择满意的工作还是稳定的工作：
　　Some people think we should choose job that could bring us sense of satisfaction, while others believe that we should choose the stable jobs. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
　　文章分析：两种观点讨论。
　　题目解析：
　　1. 稳定的工作：公务员的工作
　　2. 满意的工作：自我创业;自己感兴趣的工作。
　　作家立场：对比稳定的工作，选择自己喜欢的工作更加值得推荐
　　布局图：
　　首段：背景介绍(个性开篇)+ 争议焦点(句型引导)+ 作家立场(明确表达)
　　二段：正方观点的展开，要有细节或者例证的支持
　　四段：反方观点的展开(他人口吻)，要有细节或者例证的支持
　　尾段：再次亮明观点 + (总结理由)
　　原创范文：
　　The proportion of people’s life spent working is very high，hence，feelings about one's job must mirror how an individual feels about his or her life, in this sense, job satisfaction is indeed important for people’s well-being. One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their desirable careers. The connotation of ideal job never fails to sparkle people’s heated debate. Personally speaking, a career that brings us the minimum sense of fulfillment is superior to a stable job.
　　解析：
　　1. A is superior to B = A is better that B 优越于 ……
　　2. The connotation of …… never fails to sparkle people’s heated debate …… 的内涵一直引起人们的热烈的争议。
　　3. …… is indeed important for …… ……对于……确实很重要
　　二段：正方观点的展开
　　For a start，if a job can simply stabilize our lives and ensure our accommodations, it is simply a means of earning a living. By contrast, if there is anything that can stimulate our endless passion, tap our unlimited potentials and enhance our happiness index, it must the career that we have a burning desire to undertake. Also, the debate reminds me of myself, I am now embarking on self-employment. Five years ago, I had a seemingly stable job, namely, a civil servant, more freedom and meager salary is the feature of my job. However, my life always felt empty and I was fed up with my former job. After careful consideration, I hardened my heart to carve out my own career. Of course, the process is tough, however, I live my life to the full, I always get my hands full and have limited free time at my own disposal. Luckily enough, my sense of happiness and contentment gradually grows on me. Therefore, it is a success that if we can combine our career options with personal interests.
　　解析：
　　1. earn a living 谋生
　　2. civil servant 公务员
　　3. My life always felt empty 我总是感到生活空虚
　　4. harden my heart to carve out his own career 下定决心，自我创业
　　5. I was fed up with his former job. 我厌倦了从前的工作。
　　6. I live my life to the full 我的生活很充实。
　　7. My sense of happiness and contentment gradually grows on me. 我渐渐感受到了幸福感和满足感。
　　8. grow on 加深对于……的影响
　　三段：反方观点展开
　　As a proverb goes, one’s meat is another man’s poison. Others, however, might remain suspicious of my stand. Some people argue that it is also possible that one falls into financial difficulties if skipping between jobs too frequently or blindly pursue unrealistic dreams. Another argument hold by some people is that a stable job indicates the odds of finding ideal partner of life, seen from the traditional perspective, a young adult who enjoys stable job stands more chances of wining the heart of his or her new date.
　　解析：
　　1. Others, however, might remain suspicious of my stand 也许有人对我的立持怀疑态度
　　2. skipping between jobs too frequently 频繁跳槽
　　3. stand more chances of wining the heart of his or her new date 有更多机会赢得约会对象的芳心
　　尾段：再次亮明观点
　　To sum up, my stand is that more and more modern people can no longer be dependent nor want to be dependent on a single career. In comparison with stable job, choosing the careers that our hearts desire deserves more praises.
　　解析：
　　deserves more praises 值得更多赞美
　　原文点评：
　　原创范文仅为雅思写作范文之一种。文无定法。本文首段个性开篇;清晰亮明观点;淡化模板痕迹;第一人称口吻;忠实自我感情，词汇句法展示精彩语料库(例如大量的物称表达代替人称表达);符合雅思写作四项评分标准;可为考生赏析和学习之佳作。
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