写作题目:
2013年8月29日雅思写作Task2真题解析附范文
Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings.
Some people think the development has a positive impact, others think it is negative.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
科学家认为电脑将变得比人类更加智能,问考生这带来的影响是积极地还是消极的?
题目讲解:
分段解析
1.Introduction
开头段由背景句、论题句和观点句三部分构成:
背景句→围绕computers展开,用一两句话介绍电脑给人们生活带来的变化;
论题句→一句话引入争议,注意题目中的“intelligent”,如果只说the impacts of computer而不提“比人智能”就偏题了
观点句→可提出自己的观点
2.Positive sides
a. 电脑比人智能可以完成危险的或繁复的任务。
关键词句推荐: artificial intelligence can perform dangerous or repetitive tasks for human beings//explore distant planets//assembly line
b. 电脑比人智能可以促进研究的发展。
关键词句推荐:when computers outsmart humans, many researches that were once hindered by limited computing skills will make breakthrough
3.Negative sides
a. 电脑智能能可以代替人力,很多人可能因此失业。第一因为雇员可能还不具备操作机器需要的新技能;第二因为电脑智能提高了生产力,不需要那么多员工了
关键词句推荐:This inevitable trend would probably result in a rise in unemployment rate. //As it may take decades for workers to acquire the expertise needed for computer operation, those whose skills no longer match the needs of employers will lose their jobs.//Moreover, once the productivity is raised thanks to computer technology, business can do the same work with fewer employees
b. 人们过度依赖电脑,如果电脑瘫痪可能造成巨大损失。
关键词句推荐:As computers approaches the intelligence of humankind, people tend to rely on this technology excessively.// a computer crash may cause huge loss including the loss of property and even life.
4. Conclusion
先重申观点,再总结论据,或根据自己的观点提出建议措施,或用虚拟语气进行反面假设