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In the remainder of the paragraph, provide explanations, evidence, examples or personal experiences to build on an extended idea.
然后在接下来的段落中进行解释，列举证据、例子或个人经历来支持并拓展该段的主要论点。
Connecting show the relationship between your paragraphs in sentences by using a wide range of linking words or phrases appropriately.
使用恰当、丰富的连接词或短语来连接段落句子，并阐明他们之间的关联。
See our accompanying download for different examples.
请参看我们提供下载的附加资料。
They are usually these types: introducing ideas, having similar ideas, contrasting ideas,
连接词的作用主要有这几种：提出观点、补充说明类似观点、对比不同观点、
giving examples or evidence, explaining results, sequencing, providing explanations, sharing your experience, drawing conclusions, introducing your opinions.
列举例子或证据、阐释结果、排列顺序、解释说明、分享经历、得出结论、提出自己的观点等。
Linking can be done in a variety of other ways, for instance, through referencing by using pronouns.
连接上下文的方法多种多样，例如使用代词。
"Firstly I'm very happy to receive this award.
「首先，获得这个奖项我感到十分高兴。
Additionally, I would like to thank my colleagues, without them they wouldn't be standing here accepting this."
另外，我想感谢我的同事，如果没有他们，我就不会站在这里领奖。」
And also using substitution: "famous people deserve a private life, but celebrities also sell newspapers".
还可以进行替换，比如：「名人需要私生活，但报道名流轶事才能吸引眼球」。
As you practice writing essays, review your writing and circle the different linking devices.
练习雅思写作时，可通篇回顾文章，圈出所采用的连接手段。
Then think about how you could use different words to avoid repetition.
并思考是否可以使用其他的词汇以避免重复。
Don't overuse linking words or phrases however, this becomes irritating for the reader.
不要过多使用连接词和短语，否则文章读起来会惹人生厌。
The key in using linking words is appropriacy.
所以，恰当地使用是关键所在。
Ask yourself, is this necessary and doesn't match the content that follows?
用词之前应该先问自己，这个词是否是必须的？是否适用于接下来的内容？
For more information, please see are other writing test videos: task achievement, lexical resources and grammatical range inaccuracy.
若想了解其他三项评分标准，请观看其他雅思写作考试备考短片：写作任务完成情况、词汇丰富性、语法多样性以及准确性。
