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62. What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples toexplain your choice.
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62、我最希望我的朋友可靠 |
Topic 62 What do you want most in a friend?
A lot ofcharacteristics make a good friend. However, in my opinion, having a friend whois intelligent can do you good in many ways.
Anintelligent friend can share your problems and help you solve them properly.You are overwhelmed with stuff? He can show you the order to finish them onschedule. You are having problems with someone? Tell him and he will find outthe appropriate way to satisfy you and the other friend of yours. Let's imagineyou were stuck in an elevator for instance. You could be very upset and unable toget out of it. The situation could change dramatically if you had anintelligent friend beside. He could calm you down and quickly find the way torescue you.
Anintelligent friend is also a good example for you to learn from. In fact, youcan get a lot of interesting and invaluable things from this knowledgeablefriend. You can better yourself by learning his unique way of thinking andhandling things. My friend is very intelligent, not only in his study, but alsoin his everyday life. He can solve problems in the way that I can never thinkof. Having him my close friend for ages, I have learnt a lot of things from himthat may help me much in my life. He taught me the way of finding and solvingproblems, and even changing unchangeable situations in some intelligent ways.
Indeed,having an intelligent friend can give you the motivation to keep on trying tobe equal to him. This makes you become competitive, or emulative in somepositive ways. You may have a thought: "Why could he do that but couldn'tI ?" And you will try your best in order not to be inferior to yourfriend. You then will change your old and conservative way of thinking anddoing things, becoming open-minded to grasp new things and develop your true potentials.
All ofthese fabulous things an intelligent friend brings to you can be a stable basisfor a long-lasting friendship. However, friendship requires a thorough andmutual understanding. So, you, yourself, also play an important part to make itlast forever, with whoever friends you have.
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