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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^
我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。
每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！
87. What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your choice.
参考分析： 这是一道比较自由的题目，可以随意发挥。比如：发现很多油田（经济意义、政治意义、社会意义）；发现必须改革开放(reform and open; reform and open to the outside world; reform and open up; reform and openness◇改革开放政策the policy of reformation and opening)；发现计划经济(planned economy)体制(planning system)有问题；等等 |
87、中国发现石油 |
Topic 87 An important discovery in the last 100 years
I thinkthe most important discovery that has been the most beneficial for people in mycountry is the invention of the Internet. So far as I can tell, the Internethas been beneficial to people around the globe. My view is a commonsense one,based on the fact that the Web is a vast storehouse of information andopinions, which can be of science, literature, politics, sports or even, sex.Anyone with access to a computer and a dialup connection can unlock the doorand trawl through its offerings.
TheInternet can be used as a broad base of knowledge that contributes to theeducational system. Students and teachers benefit from the use of the Internet,as well as administrators and others outside of formal education. Studentsbenefit because the Internet provides a resource to supplemental informationfor any subject. Educators benefit because the Internet provides a vastknowledge base to prepare for teaching topics. People are not only learningfrom the Internet, they are contributing and sharing knowledge throughnetworked communities. The Internet is the advancement of education for all itsusers.
TheInternet is changing the way we do business. The Internet can deliver bettercustomer services to people. Using Internet broadcasting, we are able to targetthe right audience, prepare and present a technical presentation on a populartopic, interact with new customers, and collect hundreds of highly qualifiedleads. As Internet companies continue to find innovative ways to leverage thecapabilities of the Internet for businesses, the more we will learn how toprovide optimal solutions for customers. Which in turn, will greatly benefitpeople.
TheInternet today is a way to transfer and share information. On the whole, it isa benefit to individuals of all kinds. We do have problems surrounding theInternet that need to be solved, but aswith all new technologies there are debates and opinions. Since the Internettechnology is spreading, it will soon become as popular as all other forms ofcommunication. If you have not tried it, do so.
好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互评作文的事情，这个作文互评目前只有我在做，我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助，如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以进步非常快，做过才知道！）
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