不是容易量化的工作成就应该如何表达:
e.g. secretary
预约会议室;
安排电话;
安排会面;
预订机票;
车辆接送;
安排组织Workshop等
问题:
----没特点,不够出彩
----想转行如何写?
resolution: 体现能力:缺专业,不缺能力
组织能力、team work、interpersonal communication skills:
organized large-scale workshops for 3 times in 6 months, by cooperating with colleagues from 7 departments and 5 levels
R: arranged 3 workshops for over 3000 people in 6 months by coordinating and cooperating with colleagues (co-workers) in 5 levels (ranks) from 7 different departments
coordinate v. 协调,调节(上下级之间)
cooperate v.合作(同级之间)
总结:用数字来说话
提高:improve; increase; raise; expand; generate
--work efficiency/productivity
--profit 利润
--revenue 收益
*currency 注意货币符号:USD, CNY,?????
利益最大化:bring/ earn /generate / make maximum profit
maximize profit / revenue/ work productivity
减小:
reduce working time
simplify procedures
streamline procedures
用结果来说话:
如:运用新的库管软件RetailPro,简化了流程
simplified procedures by utilizing new management software RetailPro
R: streamlined procedures by implementing RetailPro, a new software program for stock management (长定语修饰放在后)
implement
如:通过收集并报销各部门发票,快速了解了公司大致组织架构
R:Quickly recognized the structure of the company by collecting and reimbursing invoices of each and every department
recognize 这个词用得好
reimbursement n.
invoice (pl. invoices) 发票
receipt 收据
Tips/ summary
*重点要放在前;
*信息过多需要取舍时,由所投的工作做决定
*要不断替换高级的同义词,避免词汇重复(思路与写AW相像),生词一定要差用法,不要用错,查英英释义
*你以为贴发票就真的只是贴发票,扫大街就真的只是扫大街吗?
* 应届生的要求:学习能力强、有心、沉得下心
*Action word + Key word 动作 成就 方法途径
*紧扣job description
*用数字说话
*用结果说话
with sth./ by doing sth.
n. 沟通,交流,通讯,传达,通信