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《钢铁侠》Iron Man

Nicole T. The notion that imaginative figures are needed in society is depicted in the recent film Iron Man.Tony Stark,after being held captive by terrorists,decides to eschew his former life of inventing weapons of destruction,donning on a near-indestructible suit of armor and becoming the hero Iron Man.Although he faces resentment from a majority of society,Stark continues to express his originality by protecting people from terrorists,sacrificing his personal life and himself.Stark realized that his weapons weren’t benefiting the world as much as he thought the could,and in knowing so,he decides to use his creative intellect for the greater good and become a masked hero.Through his self-sacrifice,Tony Stark proves to society that the good shall succeed and that creativity is needed in the world.Even if the people do not know Iron Man’s significance in the world,he continues to stand as a creative individual.

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像Nicole 一样把一些动词细分开来，并在文章中使用一些非常时髦的句式，是很不错的，如Nicole 写的“Tony Stark,after being held captive by terrorists,decides to eschew his former life of inventing weapons of destruction,donning on a near-indestructible suit of armor and becoming the hero Iron Man.”