SAT经典范文赏析

Beatles
Mikk O. Music is a perfect example of society benefiting from goals.If musicians didn't write new songs,there wouldn't be any music.The Beatles truly show how making goals can change the world.With over twenty-five number one hits,with songs like Let it Be and Hey Judy,the song-writing duo of John Lennon and Paul McCartney were unstoppable.This success inspired many young songwriters,therefor bringing new fantastic bands like Led Zeppelin and Queen into the world.To put it simply,without the four Beatle members' goal of changing the world through music,we as a society wouldn't be the same.This success is truly for the record books.

点评：
这一段可以作为任何一个想要把音乐作为例子段的考生的作文模板，你可以把Beatles 换成Elvis 或是Rolling Stones，换成Bruce Springsteen 或是U2，换成任何跟音乐有关的人或者乐队，只需要简单的重述一下他们的主要热门音乐以及对社会造成的影响就可以了。