• Topic 2007.11.3
• People who do not work because they have enough money are rarely happy.
这道题就是一道典型的单观点题目,“那些因为有足够的钱而不去工作的人,他们鲜少开心。”
针对单观点话题主体段的展开有两种方式,举例我们支持是A观点,先来看第一种写法。
1. A+A+A
这种写法代表着我们需要用三个理由支持自己的选择。
Topic:It is desirable to know about events from all over the world even if it is unlikely to have any effect on your daily life.
• 了解世界各地发生的事情是好的,纵使这些事不会对我们的日常生活产生任何影响。
1. To begin with, being aware of these cultural events means having more topics for communication.
2. In addition, learning news about science is necessary for us to form correct world views in today’s fast-changing society.
3. In the end, understanding political incidents serves as an excellent method to broaden our horizons.
在这种写法里考生可举出了三个论点正向支持自己的态度,认为了解这些事情是必要的。但是这种写法并不适用于每个考生,因为对于大部分考生来说,要一口气想到主体段的三个理由是有难度的,需要较为丰富的素材积累和较快地反应速度才能做到。因此,大部分考生在写作过程中倾向于选择让步段的写作方式,可以快速简单有效地解决主体段分论点。下面我们来看第二种写法。
2. A+A+(-A)
这种写法代表,前两个论点正向表达考生的观点,最后一个主体段让步一下,以达到全面看待topic的效果。在此引用一个例子:
• Scientists should be responsible for negative impacts of their discoveries?
• Disagree
1. The aim and motivation of scientists’ research is to transform the world and improve people’s life.
2. The results of most discoveries are advantageous to our society.
3. Admittedly, we should not overlook that in some cases, scientists’ inventions lead to negative impacts.However, this kind of impact often is not created by scientists. It could be the consequence of people’s improper use.
这道题我们的写法依然是先用两个理由解释我们为什么持反对的态度,然后再用一个相反的观点削弱我们的态度,从而达到全面看待问题的效果。最后一个观点的逻辑是,虽然承认有负面影响,但同时为科学开脱:这些消极的影响并非出自科学家之手,而是由于人们的不恰当使用造成的。
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