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Section A

  Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
  In recent years, tourism has developed rapidly in China. Many people believe that tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and we should try our best to promote tourism. But what these people fail to see is that tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment. As for me, I'm firmly convinced that too much tourists bring harm to the environment.
  The bad impact of tourism on the environment has mainly expressed itself in various ways. One way is the process of exploiting a new scenic spot. In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment. This process usually breaks the ecological balance of the area. In some mountainous places, trees are being cut down to build hotels for others to see and explore the beauty of the mountains. Then land slides and mud-rock flows come up. Another way the development of tourism has damaged the environment occurs when tourists go to scenic spots. Some tourists don't have the awareness to protect the environment, and ignorantly throw their garbage here and there. Some people even kill the local wildlife to eat, which badly damages the balance of the natural environment.
  It is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism. We must keep in mind that too much tourists bring harm to the environment. We need to find a balance between satisfying the needs of tourists and reducing to a minimum the pollution they cause.
  
Section B

  Dear Lily,
  I know you’re looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. And I have just seen an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy on the campus. Since you’re good at English and like teaching, I think this job is very suitable for you. It will help you both earn some money and practice yourselves. So please think about it.

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14-15分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,句式 用词富有变化,有"闪光点"基本无语言错误.

11-13分 内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,少量语法错误

8-10分 内容基本切题,完整, 条理基本清楚,文章结构基本严谨,语法基本正确,语言基本通顺恰当.少量严重错误,一些词使用不当.

5-7分 内容基本切题,完整, 条理不够清楚,教明显的母语痕迹.较多语言错误,许多词使用不当.

2-4分 内容偏题,不完整,思路混乱,语句不完整,只有少数句子可以理解,词汇拼写错误严重.

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disastrous [di'zɑ:strəs]

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adj. 灾难性的

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convinced [kən'vinst]

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adj. 信服的

 
environment [in'vaiərənmənt]

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n. 环境,外界

 
protect [prə'tekt]

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vt. 保护,投保

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impact ['impækt,im'pækt]

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n. 冲击(力), 冲突,影响(力)
vt.

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pollution [pə'lu:ʃən]

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n. 污染,污染物

 
suitable ['sju:təbl]

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adj. 合适的,适宜的
adv. 合适

 
sacrifice ['sækrifais]

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n. 牺牲,供俸,祭品
vt. 牺牲,祭祀,贱

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promote [prə'məut]

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vt. 促进,提升,升迁; 发起; 促销

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tutor ['tju:tə]

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n. 家庭教师,导师
v. 当家庭教师,当导师

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