2014年10月11日雅思写作小作文: 表格题,对比2004年澳洲五个城市的用水费用。
2014年10月11日雅思写作大作文:
Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phone and computer, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为,手机和计算机的使用增加,人们正在失去面对面交流的能力,是否同意?
作家立场:人们没有因为手机和网络的流行而失去面对面交流能力:
写作思路:让步反驳:(三分让步;七分反驳)
布局图:
首段:背景介绍 + 有待反驳的观点 + 作家立场
二段:第一次支持作家立场(细节和例证的展开)
三段:第二次支持作家立场(细节和例证的展开)
四段:让步原题的合理性:
尾段:再次亮明观点+总结理由;
写作范文:图纸( 谋篇布局)+ 原料 (遣词造句)
原创语料库:
1. the cell phone = the mobile phone 手机
2. the contrivance of the mobile phone and the Internet = the invention of the mobile phone and the Internet 手机和互联网的发明
3. A lot of parents are concerned by the fact that their children are spending too much time chatting on line or using the cell phone excessively. 很多的父母因为子女花大量的时间沉迷网络或者过度使用手机交流而忧心忡忡。
4. Many youngsters ranging from 15 to 25 always take using the mobile phone or the Internet as the only source of their communication and entertainment. 很多15到25岁的年轻人把使用手机或者网络当成是他们娱乐交流的唯一源泉。
5. have a profound influence one people’s intercourse = impose a far-reaching impact on people’s communication 对于人们的交往有深刻的影响
6. decrease the chances of face-to-face communication 减少了面对面的交流
7. under the subtle influence of the mobile phone and the Internet,a lot of people tend to become socially inadequate 在手机和互联网的影响下,很多人在社交方面变得力不从心
8. Many modern people,especially those teenagers, have been indulging in virtual social life 很多现代人,尤其是年轻人沉迷于虚拟的社交生活。
9. As a result of the addition to the mobile phone and the Internet, many young adults often ignore the outside world. 因为沉溺于手机和网络,很多年轻人经常对外面的世界视而不见。
10. distance the interpersonal relationship 疏远了人际关系
11. alienate the family relationship 疏远家庭关系
12. affect the communication among family members or friends negatively 对于家庭成员或者朋友之间的交流有不良的影响
13. The more time one spends in commuting via the high-tech products, the less time one could allocate to intercourse in real life. 一个人通过高科技产品交流的时间越多,他可以分配给现实生活中交往交流的时间就越少。
14. Not every individual is willing to communicate and associate with others via the high-tech products, especially among those senior citizens. Actually, face-to-face commutation still enjoys great popularity among many people because face-to-face communication is their deeply-habit habit. 不是每个人都愿意用高科技的产品和他人交往交流,实际上,面对面的交流依然受到大众青睐,因为面对面交流是很多人根深蒂固的习惯。