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2014年11月13日雅思写作回忆
Task 1 map
分析：本月第一次地图题。感谢宁波新东方学员钱同学的及时回顾，预祝取得理想成绩哟!
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pictures below shows the differences of the layout of a conference center between the present and its future plan.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Task 2
回忆二
Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pictures below shows the differences of the layout of a conference center between the present and its future plan.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
本题属于地图题，今年考试的地图题出现频率明显上升。地图题的思路需要抓住东南西北或者左右方位。
The two maps demonstrate the expected changes of the layout of a conference centre in the future. It is obvious that the car parking lot will be able to accommodate fewer cars, while there will be more spare for relaxation.
It terms of the inner layout, when going through the door, people will see the reception area, with a café on the right hand next to it and toilets on the left. The plan tells that a fitness center will be built to replace the café.
Through the reception area, there are two meeting rooms on the left hand and a hall left. After the plan achieved, the two meeting rooms will be divided into three meeting rooms and the grand hall will be replaced by a café, a kitchen, and a new hall.
Right to the whole building, there is a car park which is linked to the road via a small path and a garden. In the plan, two new entrances will allow people walk straight into the parking lot from the meeting area. Besides, the garden will be enlarged to the double size of the original one.
Task 2: Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus, the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigarette is banned in many countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这是一道典型的agree or disagree题目。题目本身存在因果逻辑。因此可以根据该因果关系解题。选取思路是disagree。
第一段：Introduction;
Nowadays, modern people are not only satisfied with a great variety of delicious food but obsessed with overeating as well. There exists a common voice that the advertising of some certain food contributing to this annoying phenomenon should be banned, but I doubt it.
第二段：Concession and Refutation: 的确，禁止某些食物的广告会减少人们了解到这些产品…………然而这真的会减少人们对该类型食物的食用吗?
Confessedly, the ban can shield people from the heavy exposure to the advertising of certain food products. Since advertising, people’s major access to the information of new food products, always takes advantage of multimedia method to exaggerate and beautify products. Stimulated and encouraged by such kind of advertising, people usually feel it difficult to resist the temptation of nice food. If not influenced by the advertising, people will probably enjoy a well balanced diet and overeating will be avoided. But wait a second, does food advertising really have so great power of persuasion? If without such advertising, will people really be not troubled by overeating? The answer may be negative.
第三段：有广告不一定会overeating;
One reason is that the advertising of certain food may not lead to overeating. 生活中充满了广告，并且都拍得很有意思。这样人们往往把广告当成娱乐方式，不太会因此狂吃。况且，即使没有广告，人们也不见得就不会狂吃。
第四段：cigarette广告禁止，不一定nice food广告也要禁止;
In addition, the ban of smoking is not the grounds of the ban of certain food advertising. 烟草和食物不同，吸烟影响他人，狂吃对他人无害。且禁烟广告也未见得解决了吸烟问题。那么在禁止某些食物的广告意义何在呢?
第五段：Conclusion;
As the prohibition of certain food advertising cannot address the issue of overeating, it is not necessary to ban it.
