2014年11月22日雅思写作解析及语料库
　　寄语：11月13日预测是否应该废除广告，实际考察是否应该废除食品广告。11月22日预测网络对于人和社会的利弊影响，实际考察的是网络购物的利弊。当雅思偏冷题目考过之后，雅思写作回归热点。出题形式依然是新瓶装老酒。背诵过原创语料库的童鞋们应付这两次考试，博取写作高分(6以上)阻力不大，祝福大家早日圆梦。希望大家持续关注雅思频道，原创语料库陆续新鲜发表。
　　11月22日雅思A类小作文之表格图：关于美国和加拿大留学生的对比。
　　11月22日雅思A类大作文：
　　Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development? 网络购物代替实体店购物，你认为这是积极的还是消极的?
　　请对比预测核心10题之第一题：
　　一类重点10题(推荐打造个性范文)
　　科技类：
　　People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face. What are the effects of this on individual and society as a whole? 人们可以通过网络进行很多的日常事务，不必见面，影响是什么?
　　点评：网络的发达给人们的生活，学习，工作带来便利。很多人可以远程办公，接受网络教育，网络创业，网络购物，网络交流，例证展开。但是，没有不长杂草的花园，网络的弊端可以从社交，健康，新型网络犯罪等角度展开。
　　2014年11月22日雅思写作解析：
　　利弊讨论提问标志：Do you think it is positive or negative development?
　　作家立场：网络购物利大于弊，如何扬长避短。
　　原创范文赏析：
　　首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场：
　　Such is nature to own what our hearts desire that is why many modern people like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s option of consumption in many aspects. People have been debating the pros of cons of on-line shopping without reaching any definite agreement. Personally speaking, the merits of shopping on line prevail over its possible demerits.
　　点评：个性开篇;句型引导;明确立场。
　　解析：
　　1. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s option of consumption 互联网的发明深刻改变了人们的购物选择。
　　2. the merits of …… prevail over its possible demerits …… 的利大于弊
　　二段：利好的展开：
　　Seen from the positive aspects, many benefits could be gained by selecting and buying our favorites on line. The most glaring merit is that on-line shopping not only surmounts the geographical barrier，economizes great amounts of time, but also improves the flexibility of consumption. In this sense, those who select on-line shopping have more time to embark on more worthwhile things such as focusing on working or building up physique. Another advantage coming from on-line consumption is that it adds spice to our dull routine of daily life. A case in point is that a lot of fashionable ladies take pleasure in browsing various on-line shops, comparing different prices and bargaining with the owners of on-line shops. They usually end up buying their desirable goods. Last，on-line shopping will exert a beneficial influence on one’s financial budget due to the fact that on-line shops, in most cases, do not need to rent spacious places or employing many salesgirls, therefore, the price of on-line merchandise is, comparatively speaking, economical and reasonable, which indicates that we can buy more desirable goods even though we are hard-pressed for money.
　　点评：
　　二段逻辑清晰;淡化模板;细节展开;表达精彩。
　　解析：
　　1. a case in point is that 一个例子就是
　　2. in this sense 从这个意义上讲
　　3. the price of on-line merchandise 在线商品的价格
　　4. exert a beneficial influence on 施加了利好的影响
　　5. comparatively speaking 比较而言
　　6. be hard-pressed for money 手头很紧
　　三段：弊端的展开：
　　Problems, however, inevitably ensue. On-line shopping is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. One possible demerit is that many on-line advertisements are full of flowery phrases and empty promises, therefore, consumers might be fooled into buying counterfeited goods. Many stories concerning on-line consumption fraud could justify my worry. Even worse，it is highly possible that some young consumers might spend money like water on their favorite goods on line out of the reason of seizing the chances of discount, in this case, on-line buying will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumers economically.
　　点评：谈及网络购物的弊端;论证饱满;体现作家文采。
　　解析：
　　1. Problems, however, inevitably ensue 然而，问题随之而来。
　　2. …… is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. ……是一把双刃刀，有利有弊。
　　3. …… could justify my worry. ……可以证明我的担忧
　　4. Even worse，it is highly possible that …… 更加糟糕的是，很有可能
　　5. spend money like water on …… 挥金如土
　　6. …… will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumers economically. 对于非理性消费者施加了经济压力。
　　尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由
　　Overall, what is of the utmost importance is to harness the merits of on-line buying and discard its demerits. The government should be urged to strengthen the censorship of on-line ads. Meanwhile, it is the duty of every consumer to raise the awareness of wise consumption.
　　点评：
　　尾段提出克服网络购物的建议：政府加强网络广告审查，个人提高理性消费意识。
　　解析：
　　1. wise buying 理性消费
　　2. what is of the utmost importance 最重要的是 ……
　　3. to harness its merits and discard its demerits. 利用其利好以及摒弃其弊端(扬长避短)
　　4. it is the duty of every consumer to raise the awareness of wise buying.消费者的责任是提高理性消费的意识。
　　5. The government should be urged to strengthen the censorship of …… 政府应该被督促去加强对于……的审查
　　原创语料库之网络购物(推荐背诵)
　　1. on-line shopping 网络购物
　　2. to shop on line 网络购物
　　3. buy our favorite goods via the Internet网络购物
　　解析：via = by = by means of= through prep 通过(方式上)
　　4. The 21st century has witnessed the prosperity of high-tech 21世纪见证了高科技的繁荣
　　5. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s way of consumption 互联网的发明改变了人们的消费方式。
　　6. The availability of on-line buying greatly diversifies people’s choice of consumption 网络购物使得人们的消费选择多元化。
　　解析：
　　diversify v使多元化;enrich v丰富……
　　7. The price is, comparatively speaking, economical and reasonable　网络购物的价格相对而言是经济的和合理的。
　　8. On-line buying has brought huge convenience to our daily lives 网络购物给我们的生活带来巨大的便利。
　　解析：bring huge convenience to 为……带来便利
　　9. On-line shopping not only surmounts the geographical barrier，but also improves the flexibility of consumption. 网络购物不仅仅克服地域的障碍，也提高了消费的灵活性。
　　点评：句型可以写作远程办公和远程教育。
　　10. …… have revolutionized people’s life in more ways than one 在很多的方面改变了人们生活
　　解析：in more ways than one =　in many aspects 在很多方面
　　全文点评：本次考察内容较为简单，写作灵感来自对于生活的关注，写作语料库来自经年累月的教学积累。文无定法，原创范文只是雅思写作范文之一种，希望可以抛砖引玉。刀子越磨越快，武功越练越高，鼓励童鞋们从阅读文本中积累写作素材，同时关注社会热点，勤于练笔和思考。12月雅思考情预测请持续和关注雅思频道。