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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^
我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。
每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。
在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！
27. Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer.
参考分析： 这个statement里面的限定词是sometimes。应该同意这个观点。[63]可以作为[27]的理由之一，因为，Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future。这道题甚至可以作为[43]的答案。Most successful people have one thing in common: they are capable of doing things that they virtually do not enjoy doing. |
27、同意人们有时候要做自己不喜欢作的事情 |
Topic 27 Should people dothings that they do not like?
When it comes to the topic should people sometimes do thingsthat they do not enjoy doing, optimistic and pessimistic people have differentattitudes toward this topic. For me, a person who likes changes a little, Iwould prefer to do some different things sometimes even if I do not like them.There are many reasons why I should sometimes do things they do not enjoydoing.
The first reason is that I could get more experiencesfrom the things I am doing, no matter I enjoy it or not. There are pros andcons for every experience. What I learned from doing something I dislike is toconquer the similar situation and take the advantage of good changes I may encounteragain in the future. In addition, I will see such a disagreeable thing asdiversity to my routine life.
Secondly, many things which I do not enjoying doing can actuallydo well to me. For example, I do not like to sweat because it makes meuncomfortable with those sticky clothes and bad smell. But for exercise, the activitywill cause me to sweat, surely keep me in good shape and benefit my health.Besides, I feel happy whenever I see my figure become more slender. Moreover,Overcoming displeased things gives me a sense of achievement.
All in all, it is not bad for me to do something I do notenjoy doing. Therefore, I agree that people should sometimes do things thatthey do not enjoy doing.
好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互评作文的事情，这个作文互评目前只有我在做，我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助，如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以进步非常快，做过才知道！）
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