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早上好啦~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天，你呢！非常感谢大家的陪伴，我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了，不许偷懒，托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦，写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批，共同进步!^^
我已经托福三战过了，对考试各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我，我会尽力为大家解答。
每天的写作任务是这样的，写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱（如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明），我们将进入互批作文模式。
在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲，请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较，找出自己的不足之处。开始吧！
10. "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
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10、不同意，实际上运气在人成功的过程中也很重要 |
Topic 10 Luck and hard work
There is a humorous saying in English "The grass is always greener on the other side of the valley." The saying is used ironically（讽刺的）to point out that there is a temptation（引诱物）in us all to insist that others are more fortunate than we are. This isnowhere（一事无成）more true than on the question of luck and hard work. When faced with the "bad times", we often find comfort in the idea that we are special in our degree of misfortune. I feel that such an attitude is negative, and that it can bring only further misfortune.
Many famously successful people have begun from small origins. Mao wasthe son of a (modestly prosperous) peasant; the explorer Captain Cook was sopoor that, as a child, he had to work by day and study by night; many of the affluent Americans of today are the children of the poor immigrants of yesterday. Beethoven（贝多芬）, it should be remembered, became deaf before the end of his career.There are many, many more people who have also made genuine, though Jess spectacular,successes against the odds.
Within his own terms, a person who is born into poverty（贫困的）in Indiais a great success if he manages to own a house in later life. Poverty cannot be reduced by merely complaining and blaming others: no matter how guilty other people are, each individual must reach out to success for himself. Indeed, some economists believe that the world operates by what they call "the rule ofthe jungle." They believe that in economics a person always attempts to gain profit from his neighbor: that given the chance the poor man would quickly make himself rich by trading to his own advantage.
Also, it is presumptuous（专横的）to judge another according tohis or her apparent fortune. No man can ever truly understand the sufferings of his neighbor. A man who appears comfortably rich may have suffered elsewhere in his life - through the death of a loved one, for example. Retired businessmen have often worked long hours in their youth. Surely, it must be wiser to respect achievement than to deny that anyone has achieved good in the world.
To rely on notions of luck - to believe that life is a kind of lottery（碰运气的事；彩票）- is an attempt to escape reality（是企图脱离现实的表现）. Paradoxically,（自相矛盾地，相反地）the only time a person can claim that luck is moreimportant than work is when he reflects on his own success. Because of thatmodesty, the great man then becomes even greater.（小编认为文章作者用了很漂亮的例子，文章没有正面论证他的观点，而是通过许多伟人都知在逆境中努力获得成功，由此来证明lucky has nothing to do with success，我认为这样的写法非常体现作者的critical thinking和论证功底，用了很多高难词，希望大家把这篇文章拿下去好好学习一下）
好了，今天就说这么多，大家一定要坚持练习作文，每天进步一小点，一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升！希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去，写作都是硬功夫，跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互评作文的事情，这个作文互评目前只有我在做，我希望尽可能给有需要的可可粉们提供帮助，如果你们中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以进步非常快，做过才知道！）
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