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托福分类话题写作每日一练 第24期

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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天,你呢!非常感谢大家的陪伴,我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了,不许偷懒,托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦,写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批,共同进步!^^

我已经托福三战过了,对考试各方面都很熟悉,所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我,我会尽力为大家解答。

每天的写作任务是这样的,写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱(如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明),我们将进入互批作文模式。

在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲,请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较,找出自己的不足之处。开始吧!

24. A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person wouldlike and dislikeabout living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

参考分析:

这是一个讨论假设问题的题目。尽量展开想象。注意:不要只说my city,要指出你所在城市的名字,比如:Beijing, Shanghai等等。

  • 人们会喜欢的有:女人喜欢商场;男人可能喜欢书店;大的公园、动物园;名胜古迹;文化氛围

  • 人们会讨厌的有:交通堵塞;空气不新鲜;大城市的排外主义(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly);

24、假设此城市是个大城市喜欢的
(1)更多的工作机会的收入
(2)更多的娱乐
(3)生活方便
不喜欢的可以写:(1)环境污染 (2)人比较冷漠

Topic 24 The advantages of living in my city

It is almost always the case that a person who has been living in a rural area for a while confronts certain conveniences and inconveniences of living in a city. One convenience is the number and diversity of stores and shops available in a short distance in a city. A big inconvenience(麻烦)is the traffic congestion(交通堵塞)that takes place in many places.

One big thing I remind my foreign friend who is planning to move to my city is that there is cultural diversity, or even conflicts. My friend is an international student fromJapanwho is living in a small town in California. As a foreigner, he confronts(相当于encounter)with cultures of local people everyday. On the other hand he realizes that there are few stores and restaurants that are native to his culture. It is very normal that such a person gets homesick(想家)and starts missing people and foodstuffs(食品)from his own country. Moving to a big city will satisfy such needs of him because there are many stores, restaurants, and supermarkets that are run by Japanese companies so he will less likely to be homesick any more.

However, there is one big inconvenience about living in a city, which is traffic. Especially people who drive often feel stressed on the streets that are always packed with cars lining up in the streets(街上塞满了车). It is always difficult to find parking spots either in the parking lots or on the street. Furthermore, apartments do not always provide sufficient(足够的,充分的)parking spots to their residents(居民). A lot of people who live in city feel less convenient to keep cars and choose to use public transportation. However, unfortunately, the public transportation system is not perfectly great around my neighborhood.

My city satisfies and dissatisfies my foreign friend who drives. The availability of stores and shops that are native to his country soothes his dissatisfaction about being surrounded by different cultures. However, on the other hand, traffic jam that is always the problem in big cities gives new stress that he is currently free from. It is a matter of balance between the two features that he needs to settle in.

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drives

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n. 驱动器;驱动力;驱动程序(drive的复数形式)

 
available [ə'veiləbl]

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adj. 可用的,可得到的,有用的,有效的

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transportation [.trænspə'teiʃən]

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n. 运输,运输系统,运输工具

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settle ['setl]

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v. 安顿,解决,定居
n. 有背的长凳

 
sufficient [sə'fiʃənt]

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adj. 足够的,充分的

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application [.æpli'keiʃən]

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n. 应用; 申请; 专心
n. 应用软件程序

 
certain ['sə:tn]

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diversity [dai'və:siti]

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adj. 农村的

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n. 紧张,压力
v. 强调,着重

 


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