Walt Whitman 的事迹
Clay C. Another example of the importance of originality is American poet Walt Whitman, whose innovative appreciation for nature, the human body, and patriotism contributed to his place as America's preeminent poet. Living during the 1800s. Whitman wrote several volumes of poems in which he expressed his respect for the beauty and spontaneity of nature. His use of free verse and audacious imagery invokes the ire of traditionalist poets; Whitman challenged the very concept of what poetry was. His famous poem "I hear America sing", "The Brooklyn Ferry", and his collection "Leaves of Grass" adulate the diversity of the American population and the beautiful uniqueness of the individual. Walt Whitman’s fearless divergence from accepted poetic styles and topics show his originality.

点评：Clay 连接两次运用了令人印象深刻的词汇和短语，比如“His use of free verse and audacious imagery invokes the ire of traditionalist poets”。同时，请注意 是如何列举惠特曼的著作，并且用具体的细节来打动阅卷老师的。