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(二)草拟提纲
段落一阐述问题段①开门见山，绿色校园引发人们关注;②建立绿色校园对自己、他人及社会都有重要影响。
段落二说明原因段①绿色校园具有两层含义;②绿色，无污染;③人文精神、文明建设、人文关怀、和谐。
段落三解决方法段①为了建设绿色校园，个人、学校、政府和社会各界应该采取哪些措施;②对未来的展望。
根据以上构思，写作提纲如下：
Creating A Green Campus
What’s a green campus and how to creat a green campus?
Creating A Green Campus
I.Nowadays the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention.
1.It is of vital importance to the students
2.It has a profound impact on society
II.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.
1.green environment preservation and protection
2.a civilized atmosphere for students’ mental health
III.It is imperative for us to take effective measures to creat a green campus.
1.The law and regulations should be worked out
2.Enhanced the awareness of the students themselves
(三)落笔写作
1.阐述问题段 根据题目中的提纲，首先强调建立绿色校园的重要性，最好在此句之前做一个铺垫，介绍建立绿色校园受到人们广泛关注这一背景信息，即the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention.
常见问题：用词匮乏。如：“很重要” important。
使用对策：使用精彩替换词。如：the indispensable part for, has a profound impact on, significance等。
2.说明原因段 对绿色校园的两方面含义进行论述。另外在展开论证过程中，抽象句子要举例说明，如：such as planting more trees and flowers, for example, students will be severely punished in case of cheating in exams，这些具体信息使文章更生动，容易理解。
常见问题：结构不清，缺乏层次感。
使用对策：要注意各个理由之间的逻辑关系，适当地运用表示层次关系的词语，如：to begin with, in addition to; furthermore/not only … but also …/ what’s more; for example/for instance/such as; in other words/ in particular等。
本文的说明原因段可分为如下三个层次进行论证：
①开门见山：首先对“绿色校园”在下文要涉及的内容进行总体概括：The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.
②正面论证：说明“绿色校园”的第一层含义，也就是我们最熟知的一层含义，即campus construction refers to green environment preservation and protection。然后举例进一步解释此含义，并强调其重要性：which makes campus an ecological and natural resort.在这个过程中考生要注意亮点词汇以及句型的使用。
③反面论证：使用in addition to引出“绿色校园”的第二层含义，即create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’ mental health.然后举例进一步解释此含义。如：For example, students will be severely punished in case of cheating in exams and plagiarizing in academic papers.
